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Strange
and Beautiful
Zen Cymru,
Peter Finch (Seren, £8.99)
A Cure for Woodness,
Michael Haslam (Arc)
Internal Rhyme,
Scott Thurston (Shearsman)
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There
books, three variations on the non-mainstream, three roads to go down looking
for that elusive animal, enlightenment.
Peter Finch's collection is probably the most easy-reading, except the more
you read, the more you realise that there is a melancholy core to this
collection that belies the often jaunty experimentalism. This is a collection
about aging, about seeing your own body betray you:
On the notes
when I browse them
while the
nurse is out
the sketch
looks a sea anemone
still life:
bladder with flower
done in biro
sideways on
the urine analysis
Red cells
present: too
many to
number
Along side this more serious subject matter are poems in the form of indexes,
about Ikea and Elvis seen in Asda, all done with his usual wit and brio. If
there's nothing as experimental as his tribute to Bob Cobbing, there is plenty
of playful innovation here as well as a warm humanity and humour.
But what makes this a more than interesting collection for me are all those
undercurrents of mortality. Finch is a poet of celebration, but one who also
sees the darkness of 'The Trial of Phil Spector':
There's a
wall of guns.
Spector puts
one to the dark head of
Leonard
Cohen. Fires one at Lennon while
making
Rock'n'roll. Another at Dee Ramone
when he won't
play bass. Waves one at Ronnie when
she says she's
going. Shows her a gold coffin in the basement.
Glass lid.
Says you'll be in that if you
so much as
speak to anyone,
you
infidelious slap.
These are poems lived in the modern world of the modern man, who lives in
urban Cardiff, in the present but with memories of a lively past.
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Michael
Haslam is a very different poet, much more rural on the one hand and much
more linguistically challenging on the other. I compared his last book to
folk music, and certainly in subject matter, there are echoes of folk themes,
ballads and the like in his work. But it's as if a folk singer were being
backed by a free jazz saxophonist: the music of his poems is often dissonant
and driving forward, while he talks about sexual encounters on the moorland ('Running
to Meter') or goes wandering round an old hall long since fallen into disuse
('Old Hall down in the Hollow; Spring up Sunny Bank').
The best way of reading Haslam is to read him aloud, to roll your tongue
round his sprung rhythms, his internal rhymes and alliterations, his wild
music:
Much must the
English love the mulch and slush
that issues
from the mouth of miry rough,
the stench of
silage from the mix of herbage
verbiage
and roughage, sour queach
given off the
rushy moss, mephitis of
a ferrous
sump with quaking crust
and all that
trickles into tracklessness down valley bottom.
('The Love of English: Haslam's Folly')
This is not an urban wit, but one with its roots in the poet of Plowman's, of
the uncanny woods, hills and valleys of Northern England. This is a radical
landscape poetry that challenges the comfortable picture of English rolling
hills and cricket matches, a music of the deep uncanny. I don't always
understand it and I don't always feel comfortable in these poems, but Haslam
is, along with Maggie O'Sullivan and Geraldine Monk, among the best visionary
modernists in England.
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Scott
Thurston is another visionary poet, though his vision is much less focused on
a particular landscape than Haslam. His poems are slower, more contemplative
and feel much like the process of a mind thinking. His form in this book,
with its short lines and two columns, allows for connections to be made
vertically, horizontally and even sometimes diagonally:
internal
rhyme a
species of adder music
I can feel
your badge
by my side
eternal flask leave
out those signs
of
relief at the end of withdrawal
symptoms
pleasure you
can't measure
the hybrids
stand at the
gateway the
larger the logic that makes
possible
dynamic critical
constructions
you will
terribly well
un-read
This makes for an almost endless series of re-readings, juxtapositions,
connections and questioning of the text. For instance, is this one poem in 4
sections divided into 20 parts, or four sequences of 20 poems each?
Philosophical question occurs throughout, linguistic turns of phrase that
lead to further questions, and a kind of agnostic spirituality arises from
these pages like an atmosphere.
I have seen Scott Thurston perform before now, and if he has the freedom, he
has the tendency to pace the stage in a kind of circle, like a man thinking
aloud, while performing a kind of dance. Though there are suggestive hints at
events and narratives, this is not a book that can be said to be 'about' one
thing or another. And yet these poems are strangely moving, affecting and
beneath-the-surface emotional in ways that I rarely see in English poets. One
of the strangest and most beautiful books I've read in a long while.
©
Steven Waling 2010
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