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Window for a Small Blue
Child, Gerrie Fellows
[80pp, £8.95, Carcanet]
The Night Trotsky Came to Stay, Allison McVety
[54pp, £7.95, Smith/Doorstop]
Hazard and Prospect: New and Selected Poems, Kelly Cherry
[174pp, $19.95, Louisiana State University Press]
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IVF children are hard-won miracles of science as well as
of nature and human love. In Window
for a Small Blue Child Gerrie Fellows
charts the process of in vitro fertilisation to the moment at which the mother's
body finds itself in possession of what it can recognise by deep instinct -
that it carries a live, implanted embryo. Fellows, who has a daughter through
IVF, finds language sufficient for both the tortuous, risky technology and
the human drama of this in what is a spell-binding sequence of poems.
Couples who attempt IVF often find the minute attention focussed on their
fertility almost unbearably oppressive; but here it is a revelation. Fellows extends an intense bodily
awareness back to the moment of ovulation with which the poem opens and then
follows it through the bewildering maze of investigations and interventions
to the point of knowing 'what it knows' without laboratory corroboration.
What is experienced in the body - the workings of glands, hormones and
synapses - is inseparable from how we see and know the world. Although the
IVF process heightens consciousness of minute chemical changes to an extent
that can seem abnormal and alienating:
as if the
body had become gigantic
and
embryologists had taken the place
of its
thinking cells
(from 'The Flowerings of the Possible, vii')
the flip side is an ecstatic awareness of connection with the whole creation:
Aphids gather
on the last of the raspberries
dusky red
light falls on the garden
Codes
pas along neural pathways
hormonal
codes enter the bloodstream
The light
shines on the late fruit
the dark red
berries the
clustered
follicles of
the ovary
(from
'The Lily and the Egg')
The possibilities of human reproductive technology have brought a fiercely
intensified experience of longing and hope, loss and requital. Window
for a Small Blue Child is a love poem in
which the human couple, painstakingly re-encoded molecule by molecule, yearn
for their unborn child, a tantalising yet sustaining possibility for which
they are prepared to sacrifice as much as they have to for as long as they
can. Although the book is essentially a single narrative, Fellows uses an
open-field layout and minimal punctuation which never sacrifices the sense of the moment. Gwynneth Lewis memorably employed a
similar structure to write of space flight in Zero Gravity; and these books both do similar pioneering work,
of coming to poetic terms - in the body, the mind and the ear - with ways in which technology has
expanded human possibility. The books have a similar feel, too. In medical imaging a few cells assume
the appearance of vast lunar landscapes. Seen under a microscope a testicular
biopsy, for example, reveals
a complex
membrane of gullies and rock-fall
mountain
debris
shed from the
surface into the lumen
a journey
through glacial moraine
(from
'Blue Mountain Postcard: Six Slides from a Testicular Biopsy')
Gerrie Fellows brings to her poem an encompassing geographical sense which
relates to her own family history (explored in depth in her earlier book The
Powerlines) - born in New Zealand she now
lives in Scotland. As in that earlier book, she embraces particular knowledge
and specialised vocabulary - a vital part of Window for a Small
Blue Child is the glossary of terms she
provides at the end.
Window for a Small Blue Child
is an exciting and important book that extends the territory of poetry, and
although the processes it describes are often tedious and stressful for those
who undergo them, Gerrie Fellows' writing is never less than compelling.
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Allison McVety's The Night Trotsky Came to Stay looks to the past rather than the future. This is
Gerrie Fellows' window from the other side - the daughter peering into the
past to wonder at the magic of her own making, imagining how her parents'
first meeting
is sand
through an
hourglass, running from her
to him. And I
am there too, ghosting the wall,
a smudged
image pressed flat on paper,
sifting the
grains, watching time and again
the atoms of
my own clock forming.
(from 'Going Back to Charlotte Street')
In this collection the past has a physical pull, a drag like the bodies of
suicides in 'Ship Canal' which grow 'Bigger than when they went in', feeding
the young McVety's dreams of 'gold barges oaring their way to
Avalon,/feluccas...or the final blaze of longboats' before they are brought
ashore stinking, and rotted to nothing.
Her relationship to the past is thus ambivalent. There is something compulsive about
it, as if it seduces, and demands too much, and leaves her feeling slightly
cheated. 'Bronze Age Skull', which is essentially a descriptive poem, ends
with the lines
... And it occurs to me
with others'
hands cradling,
cupped
against accidental fall,
that her
head, hollow, carries
more weight
than mine.
McVety has a palpable sense of legacy, of family expectation and social
precedent. In 'Women at their Gates' she describes growing up in a neighbourhood
of housewives;
padlocked to
their kitchen lives who taught us
how to wait
and what it meant to go
and in 'Living up to Ronald Coleman' her younger self comes home after
midnight and inches self-consciously past the photograph of her father in
uniform, who
gassed
and shot,
stands his watch for me,
always
expects much more than I am.
The poems are full of women knitting or stitching, mending, making the best
of things; of pubs and pavements; and heavy mineral substances - chalk, soil,
silt, coal. They speak unmistakeably of a particular phase of British
history, the baby-boomers growing up, heavy industry gasping its last, the
nuclear family still the norm, Manchester emerging from post-war austerity
and surviving the blast. Taken
as a whole the collection adds up to a more than personal reflection on the
persistence of history. The last
line of the last poem - 'Still Life - William Scott RA (1913 - 1989)' -
speaks of 'the layers of old ground that season the pan'; which sums up the
flavour of McVety's own art as well as typifying her gift for a memorable
image. The quality of her ear invests commonplace things with resonance, and
the intensity of her focus conveys sometimes abject tenderness. This is an admirable collection of
well-made poems.
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Kelly Cherry's Hazard and Prospect is a 'new and selected' covering a period of
thirty-three years. The blurb claims that 'Cherry presents a lifetime of
powerful writing that coheres into a single, seamless work', and the selected
poems are taken out of the chronological order of their first appearances and
rearranged in thematic groups under jaunty new headings - eg. Lady Macbeth on
the Psych Ward, Life in the Twentieth Century. The 'new' element of the book
consists of a handful of short poems of place and a long prose-poem charting
Cherry's late found domestic happiness on a farmstead in Virginia.
Kelly Cherry writes best where she has a simple strong emotional engagement -
in particular, in a handful of poems relating to her parents, and to her
first marriage, though many small press magazines routinely deliver dozens of
poems at least as decent on similar themes. Generally though, I find Cherry's writing
pretentious. Take this for
example, which first appeared in the collection modestly entitled Death
and Transfiguration (1997)
Miracle and
mystery
Are swans
mated
For the whole
of history,
Their
pairing fated.
The bread we
cast upon the waters
Is what they live
on.
They are not
martyrs,
Though they dive
down
And down,
through dark green depths, to find
Love in a
lake.
Their
movement ripples the mind.
They love
each other for our sake.
If one dies,
the other grieves
Itself to death.
Two lives,
One
breath.
(from 'Miracle and Mystery')
After repeated attempts to find something positive to say (the book has a
nice picture on the cover, the typeface is good, the paper quality is
wonderful) I have to own up to finding Hazard and Prospect immensely dispiriting - except in as much as it
refreshes my faith in the most basic advice given to beginners: use rhyme
carefully, avoid abstractions as a starting point, and even - yes please -
show don't tell.
©
Meredith Andrea 2008
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